Sunday, May 1, 2011

VAMPIRE 1

My Name is Magnus.
I am and now will always be 21.
This is me before the transformation, before my life got turned
UPSIDE DOWN!

This is what i look like now.
I'm a slave to the sun.
I Cant be around blood for more than 5 min without trying to kill someone.
You don't know what its like to have all
your senses heightened.
LOVE
SORROW
HAPPINESS
JEALOUSY.
All heightened

Back to the challenge.
so i decided to go to the club i knew a human would be at
PLASMA 101.

Its actually a club for vampires but humans stumble in every so often.

The club part is at the top of the building.
it has 2 floors and reeks of humans
that's how I know that i will find my first
VICTIM.

My vampire senses kick in i feel the need to hunt.
A Human Is In Sigh....

I see Who i want that man over there...

He's playing the piano.
Type A
MY FAVORITE!!! 

"Hello it's nice to meet you" I say

Have to get friendly or i wont be able to drink.
No drink means not being able to turn him..

So I got friendly with him

Lets see what hes thinking
.... .. .... ....
(who is this guy and where did he come from)
hmmmmm let's change that to
...... ... ..... ....
( I want to hang out with this guy)

He doesn't know that I'm following him down.
I am actually sublimely compelling him to go to my house

He has arrived!

"CAN I TURN YOU?"
"Yes"
"Put your hand out"



They always pass out

He will be safe here.
the young vampires when their transitioning is not a
PRETTY SIGHT.

Even vampires need sleep

He's waking up

"WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME"
"Nothing that you need to be frightened about"
" I SAID WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME"
"nothing to be concerned about you will mearly become a night walker"
"Night walker???"
"Vampire"

"You will Not be afraid you will be calm and rational"
(compelling)

"Eat the fruit"

"what is it??"
"Stop asking questions and EAT"

NOM-NOM-NOM

"Why do i feel like i have so much power"
"Because what you ate is called PLASMA FRUIT its a substitute for blood
it grows on trees that are only found in one place and one place only
TRANSYLVANIA"  
He will be one of us soon i am finally going to have a family
one to call my own.

He sleeps as a human but will awake as a vampire!

Oh i forgot about my butler
Splendora.  
She lets me feed every so often
(not like she has a choice)
Shes compelled

"You will be alright your almost into the last phase of transitioning"

"Here let me make it quicker the less human blood in your veins
The better"

"ARISE SON OF THE NIGHT WALKERS
YOU ARE NOW ONE OF US"

"Welcome to my clan together we will be
A FAMILY"

RICKY BAILY
1ST VAMPIRE TURNED

4 comments:

  1. Please comment and tell me what i can approve on THANKS!!!!

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  2. Really good post! Loved it! I can't wait for the next one it's very original! :D

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  3. I really like it! It's original, and I like the thought of the way you write.

    You want to know what you can improve on.. Well, I'd say your punctation. I noticed a few errors, but not bad. I could understand what you were saying, so it's not a problem.

    "A Human Is In Sigh...." How about, 'A human is in. -Sigh-' or make "sigh" in italics or something.

    ""ARISE SON OF THE NIGHT WALKERS
    YOU ARE NOW ONE OF US"" How about, "Arise, Son of the Night Walkers. You are now one of us."

    "He will be safe here.
    the young vampires when their transitioning is not a
    PRETTY SIGHT." How about, "He will be safe here. When young vampires are transitioning, it's not a pretty sight." But these are just suggestions, and people can understand what you're saying so other than that it's a VERY GOOD post. :))

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